27 Jul MORE ABOUT GREAT FIRST LINES
I’m intrigued with the first lines of books. Some draw us in by merely stating the basic facts of a story "It was Monday morning, it was...
I’m intrigued with the first lines of books. Some draw us in by merely stating the basic facts of a story "It was Monday morning, it was...
There is a Chinese proverb that states: "A book is like a garden carried in the pocket."
"Books let us into their souls and lay open to us the secrets of our own." ~William Hazlitt
"A book must be an ice-axe to break the seas frozen inside our soul." ~Franz Kafk
"Books are the bees which
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The Editors
The form rejection letter is discouraging because if offers no suggestions for improvement. Of course, rejections only go to those who submit manuscripts, so you are further along than if you hadn't submitted at all. That probably doesn’t help, so try this one. Highly successful authors like J. K. Rowling, Dr. Seuss and Madeleine L"Engle got the same treatment. Madeleine L"Engle’s A WRINKLE IN TIME was turned down 29 times. Rowling first submitted
While we cherish such support, we need to remember that a mother's opinion is highly prejudiced. Remember the drawing you did at five? It probably ended up on the refrigerator door, not in a gallery. Likewise, just because Mom loves your kid's book doesn't mean an editor will. Editors know what kids like and what gives a book kid appeal.
In my workbook, Write a Marketable Children's Book, there is a section called "Discover the Magic of Kid Appeal." In it, I show how you can appeal to kids today.
You do so with a story that:
Remember Pippi Longstocking in the The Adventures of Pippi Longstocking? (She's really Pippilotta Delicatessa Windowshade Mackrelmint Ephraim’s Daughter Longstocking.)
Pippi’s appeal is